Well, yes, but if you try to FORCE the funny, it just doesn't work, y'know? You have to be more subtle and work it in like you would with prose, really. Or like come up with a couple great one-liners and try to work them in somehow. And then edit it to make it flow better.
And yeah... the thing with the Fay apper, is I think they're spending too much time just trying to edit their app, rather than going and revisting/studying the character again before taking a fresh start.
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Date: 2006-12-06 09:57 pm (UTC)And yeah... the thing with the Fay apper, is I think they're spending too much time just trying to edit their app, rather than going and revisting/studying the character again before taking a fresh start.