Still interesting. :) I want to find out more about the world and how it works.

Same issue with the sentence structure.

I wonder why she is being so violent and reacting so much to the rather juvenile taunts of the boys - young men - around her. Is she trying to fit in like 'one of the boys'? Is she that immature herself? Inquiring minds want to know! :)

Sometimes you have to make chapter breaks. You could alter your transition from morning classes to lunch in such a way that it would give you a good place to break up the chapter. Sometimes internal thoughts are a good tool to use for creating those spaces.